I hope you take constructive criticism, because even though the poem had structure it had no flow. and where it had flow was where you lost words. No offense. Otherwise good post
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I hope you take constructive criticism, because even though the poem had structure it had no flow. and where it had flow was where you lost words. No offense. Otherwise good post
Well, I see the criticism part but where is the constructive part?
here: You can easily become better if you tackle other topics and practice free verse. Everything doesnt have to rhyme.
Thank you for elaborating on the comment @movievigilante made. I agree the first comment lacked the constructive part . I see where you are coming from! and I can agree the flow could have definitely been better! This poem was already me stepping out of my comfort zone when it comes to what I typically write, and as I learn and grow the steps I take along the way may be sloppy but I'll continue to move forward molding my technique. Definitely plan on practicing free verse and more writing styles in general! Anyways I appreciate the constructive criticism! I am always looking for ways to improve.
Love you too, boss :). Why dont you constructively criticise my work too? or maybe jut rip it apart XD