You are already doing very well, my friend. I know that as time goes on you will only do better. I see that @mitneb has already provided you with some excellent editing advice. I'm also happy to see that you plan to apply it. I'll just mention that you need to edit soon, because after a week, Steemit locks you out from editing your work.
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Already corrected it. :) Thank you again, you people are great.
Excellent, my friend, excellent! :D