I guess the same message could have been delivered better with lesser usage of 'I'. Sometimes it can get annoying for readers to see so many sentences preceded with 'I'. Though it is a write up for introducing me; over usage of 'I' might send across egotistical vibes to the readers. So, it isn't a bad advice. What do you think, @pfunk?
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Yeah I thought it's fine to use so many I's in a self-introduction. Elsewhere.. eh it's up to him :)
Haha, I had thought the same thing. But since it was explicitly pointed out, I'm giving it a second thought ;)