RE: Poetry, One of The Best Place to Prevent "Stress"

[iwrite]

I reread the poem...

It's about Opium and Poison...

"I can only reach you through prayers,"

What are you reaching here? The Opium and Poison or both?

"Hope,
We meet at the right time,
On the top of “waiting”………"

Here there is Hope, meeting the right time and Waiting... for what?

There should be at least an indication the shift or flow of the subject before entering into another "place". It's hard to be lost in our own maze.

Comments

[poetry-vibes]

Thank you so much for your correction. But, I mean in this post. "reach" for someone, not for opium, poison or both of them. And at the last sentences, I mean that meet with someone who is my mate and waiting for my mate

[iwrite]

The last paragraph is an open ended thing to ponder upon, I maybe lost there because I'm following your poem via opium and poison. Since you made the point about it, I rest my case then. Thanks too...

[poetry-vibes]

Thanks :)