Welcome to steemit @aboutcoolscience.
I saw your comment on @stephenkendal 's post so I thought I would drop by and say hello.
I am interested in science so I look forward to seeing what you post.
Two small tips to help you progress :
- break your text into more smaller paragraphs to make the post easier to read, and maybe add in more smaller photos
- add more information to your profile - where you are, what you are interested in etc.
Good luck!
thank you for your feedback, I will try to keep your advice in mind the future