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RE: Im Enric Duran. From "robbing" banks to take over a cryptocurrency, my revolutionary struggle...now im here!

in #introduceyourself • 8 years ago (edited)

Your story is AMAZING. You totally need to write " how I "robbed" banks for 400k and used the money to destroy capitalism" post, or something along those lines :)
Please read my little guide on how to make your post more readable and appealing , please!

https://steemit.com/steemit/@razvanelulmarin/help-me-upvote-you

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     8 years ago  

    Thanks! Which part of your recommendations do you think that matters more for this first post?

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     8 years ago  

    Hey! I'd try to space the paragraphs more and make it more redable. It's very difficult to read it all, it's jus a wall of text.
    Also, I'd emphasize some important parts. bold, italics etc.

    Little things, the content is amazing. If you need more help don't hesitate to ask!! You can find me on rocket.chat as well!
    Keep it up man!

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     8 years ago  

    thanks, I was just prudent to see how the editing system works, because is different in each platform... Anyway now I edited for spacing the paragraphs... will take in account the emphasis for next times