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RE: Introducing myself, Jeffrey Sorenson, artist, visionary and geek.

in #introduction8 years ago

Welcome to Steemit. I love this from your website:

From punchcards to the blockchain and AI in under a lifetime!

I'm probably one of the few people on the site who actually handled punchcards.

By the way, part of what I do is edit. In fact, I edit when I really just want to be reading. You should take a lot at your second paragraph, second sentence under About The Artist on your website; that sentence has the structure/logic issue known as a dangling modifier.

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Thanks for your comment. That sentence definitely needs revision. : )