Big fan of this poem! Kept the rhyme scheme going throughout without straining too much.
Love the sense of despair yet acceptance, that soul-aching weariness that you convey.
So I thought I’d take a peak
Before my soul grows weak
Is it supposed to be peek?
Thank you so much for appreciating my work. So glad to know your a fan. Yeah I admit i have few errors there. I'll edit it anyway thanks for it. :D