Truly beautiful imagery and intense sensory detail. I can see the dispersed crowd and feel the atmosphere of celebration.
This line is very emotive:
smiles at this last inebriated shipwreck of sounds.
Another favorite line:
The dawn has already kissed your hem,
I lay here, resting on the well's humid marble.
I can feel this, both the marble and lingering feelings. Well written @f3nix!
I played for several years as guitarist of a choir...we toured around north Italy and when they were drunk I can assure you that you could never follow them with the instrument, they were simply too tuned for their shipwrecked voices :-P Thank you again for your opinion dearest!