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RE: The Pond - Entry for Supernatural Writing contest by Jerry Banfield

in #jerrybanfield7 years ago

very well written sister and the narration is what I loved the most, it's like listening to a conversation rather reading which made it more interesting. This is exactly the same style I write stories too. Loved it <3

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