Yea man, this is dope. Great use of punches. Obviously you've done this once or twice ;). The scheme was cool, your classic a capella punchline structure. I would've liked to see a little bit of a switch up, maybe throw in some multis in some bars. Also would've liked to see a bit more muli-syllable end rhymes.
Dope drop man, thanks for participating!
Thanks man. Wasn't too sure what you wanted. But next time imma use a lot of multies.