This feels really personal. It's a great interpretation of the theme cause I feel like you're being real with your readers and telling your story. There's great lines and a dope flow too. Really well crafted, this is a strong contender for the contest.
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful comment, I really try to be the best lyricist but I still don't know English at a level that I want to so I will just keep improving for the duration of my life :D Yea my man, just keepin it real - "got rid of the fakes" ;) Thank you again, just saw you did an entry too so going to check it now :)
I couldn't tell you weren't comfortable with English. This really flows well, and it's not even your native language! Kudos man. Keep keeping it real bro!
Really? :D Thank you again you are really a cherry on top in itself hahah I'm glad you feel the flow just from reading! Yea bro