Thanks so much bro, definitely could have improved the writing but this was good practice towards the journey of making another impacting track in the future
Here is the audio of this verse
https://steemit.com/dtube/@verbal-d/0tfwv8ts
It is all part of the creative process and growth, appreciate the feedback
No probs man! Appreciate you participating!
Definitely bro, I'll keep doing so as long as time allows :)