[시] 빠지다

sh413 (45)in #kr • 8 years ago

한걸음, 한걸음 그리고 한걸음
한 걸음씩 갔을 뿐인데

어느 순간
단단했던 내 발 밑의 땅이
무너져 내려

그대에게 빠지다

/필명: 생각날때

8 years ago in #kr by sh413 (45)

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valueup (57) 8 years ago (edited)

평범한듯 담백한 마지막 구절 좋습니다~^^

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sh413 (45) 8 years ago

감사합니다 너무 담백하죠 ㅎㅎ

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vimva (66) 8 years ago

시구와 사진이 절묘하네요 :) 잘 읽었습니다.

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sh413 (45) 8 years ago

핫 가벼운 시에도 댓글을 ㅠ 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ

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