This is really awesome! You have managed to capture the feel of the poem perfectly. I love the soft pink light coming through the doorway, the tug of memory and places beyond those external walls. The line you drew from the figure's right foot to armpit is just a perfect line in my opinion. There is something about the subtle recurve - something not quite anatomically correct, but somehow spiritually correct. You nailed it!
Super happy to have found you through @yahialababidi's blog. Followed :)
Much love - Carl
Thank you for checking this out, and for leaving such beautiful praise! I feel honored and encouraged to continue posting my work!