even if you hadn't said you were a musician, I would have guessed it based on the natural rhythm of your words. you can always see music's hand in the writings of those who have spent too much time with music.
I appreciated the cyclical quality you incorporated here, your wrapping of thoughts with framing.
Not an easy read, of course, a tragic one, but you have found beauty in sadness - in particular, I think this line is brilliant:
counting days instead of sheep
Thank you for sharing, @charlotteroze, look forward to watching you grow through your pursuit of the challenge and continue to connect with your readers.
That's so neat (: I actually thought this poem lacked a certain type of rythm. Like I threw in one too many words somewhere but I couldn't pin point it. I'm very relieved to know I don't come off too Dr. Suess ;p
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment I really appreciate every word <3 (: