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It has been a stressful week for me as I try to get my startup off the ground. I feel the pressure now as I'm planning to launch it before the high season. Apparently, there's still bloodbath in the crypto space and someone here has to pay the bills. For now, I will try to offer some day trips and small tour packages for friends, at least for the reviews. I realize how being a perfectionist is hurting me as I am obsessing over little details and other unimportant shit on my website. Now that I am aware of my own mistakes, I'll just focus on the 10% that matters. The biggest challenge so far is building a good network and partnering with the service providers. It's a real challenge for someone who prefers to be on her computer and with her cat. The fact that I get disappointed with people easily makes it even worse. Is it fine not to choose people I don't want to do business with? I think I prefer to work with people I really like especially that I work on my own. I have that freedom now, right?
Here's a part of my website that I've been working on these days. I am open to suggestions, corrections or any valuable thing you think I should add.
Personalized Travel Experiences
We are in the business of exceeding expectations and we don’t stop until we do. It is our job to work hard so you don’t have to. We take your wants, travel style, time and budget constraints into account to deliver the best personalized travel experience. With us, it’s all about you.
Local Knowledge
When you choose us, you’re choosing more than the world’s best tropical destination. You’re also choosing the support of travel experts who know the ins and outs of every place here worth visiting. Our travel experts explore and thoroughly investigates all destinations and services featured on our tours to ensure that we are only offering the best quality services for our clients. We will never take you anywhere a local would not choose. Our routes and accommodations are all carefully planned so you get an insider’s view of your destination.
Attention to Detail
You don’t have to get bogged down in the details of your travel planning or restricted to the offerings of a travel company or a single hotel. Our guides and trip designers collaborate for weeks before your arrival to ensure that everything is taken care of, every detail, every part of your customized itinerary, from welcome to final farewell. With us, details are everything. We do our best to make sure that your trip will be seamless.
Organization
We have carefully chosen our partners based on the quality of their services, sustainable practices, and approach. We make sure that our local communities benefit as well as our clients. With us, a traveler will experience unparalleled access to the best the local community has to offer.
Originality
There’s no doubt that there are a lot of tour agencies around but we strive to be different by giving you a fully-customized itinerary and a personalized experience unlike any other. We are the best at what we do, and there’s no other tour operator that does the same kind of quality of service. We don’t settle for anything less. We are constantly trying to discover new destinations and special experiences to make your trip one of a kind.
Hi Diabolika,
Just a few suggestions as I get caught up:
Personalized Travel Experiences
Great as is.
Local Knowledge
.... Our travel experts have explored and thoroughly investigated all destinations and services featured on our tours to ensure that we only offer the best quality services for our clients. We will never take you anywhere a local would not choose to go.
(If you prefer the tenses as they were, you need to take the 's' off investigates, but present perfect then simple present is better I think.)
Attention to Detail
Our experienced guides and trip designers collaborate for weeks before your arrival to ensure that everything is taken care of down to the very last detail. From the first welcome to final farewell, every part of your itinerary is customized to your wants and needs. With us, details are everything. We do our best to make sure that your trip will be seamless and pleasurable.
Organization
We have carefully chosen our partners based on the quality of their services, sustainable practices, and personal approach. We make sure that our clients and the local communities can connect with each other to create a rich and memorable experience. With us, a traveler will experience unparalleled access to the best the local community has to offer.
Originality
Unlike other tour operators that offer pre-packaged tours, we provide fully customized itineraries and personalized experiences made just for you. We are the best at what we do and no other tour operator can compete with our quality of service. We are constantly expanding our list of possible destinations and creating special experiences to make your trip a once-in-a-lifetime experience. We don't settle for less than the best, and neither should you.
Cheers,
CZ
Yey thanks again for proofreading! I will go with the suggestions of course!
Had no idea you were working on this project! Hope all things go well!
All good thanks!
Thats an amazing tropical place picture dude i wish could go there
I have no experties in traveling business. I pray for your success. All the best @dibolika.
Thank you.
I would say this in another way, but don't have the words right now. I'll chew it for some time and see if I can get with something better. Otherwise it's close to perfect the extract from your website.
We will never take you to a place full of dickhead tourists?
:)
HA HA. That's a good one.
I wish I can write that, dickhead tourists are everywhere now lol.
Thank you, I will wait for it!
Very beautiful nature. I hoppe you have a nice day.
Reads really well, @diabolika.
Aww you are nice.
This all sounds great and the grammar and syntax and everything is perfect as far as I can see.
This might be because I tend to think the worst of people but if most of your customer are coming from wealthier countries they may have an attitude like traveling outside of the west is unsafe or something (I live by the Mexican border and I hear that kind of fear coming from people that come from other parts of the country when I talk about how people go over there to shop or have dental work). So, maybe some throwaway line about how they are "safe" with you might make them feel more at ease. Then again, you are the business person and I am just some guy on the internet so what do I know lol.
Yeah a friend from the US just told me the same last night me and I am still figuring out how to portray that 'safe' image lol. Let me know if you have any idea.
I'll probably just pictures of their people actually traveling lol.
That's the disadvantage of being too sensitive, as sensitive ones are more prone to get hurt by other's intentional or unintentional behavior...
My tip in this regard is "keep your self busy and preoccupied to dissuade all the shitty thought"
Best of luck for your future endeavours...
That is true.
Great post @diabolika
I see this was the project you were working on. Anyways, good luck and i think it's going to turn out great. Anyways, if the person you find yourself dealing with has little interest in growing your site then there's no need working with them.