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RE: A Post About Nothing Published in the Worst Possible Timeslot

in #life • 4 years ago

😂🤣 Well, with a punny muse like Poosie!! 🤣😂

I was 100% ENTHRALLED.

The hilarity. The sheer wild-n-craziness. The shitty grammar. It's brilliant. And I now GET IT... said a new fan for life. Please remain an active Hiver for always, @nonameslefttouse.

Seriously.

This post showed me a real-life, nuanced tweak I can make to be a better writer. And the post you linked to made me momentarily drop my angst, and laugh my ass off.

Just for contrast and kicks, here's my version of a squirting llama:

https://steemit.com/life/@erikaharris/an-african-sex-technique-where-men-get-to-worship-at-the-throne-of-vagina-and-bow-before-the-queen-clitoris-a-researched

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Boiled that one down to a science hey.

Well, since we're on the topic now...
https://peakd.com/funny/@nonameslefttouse/there-will-be-no-vagina-today

Boiled that one down to a science hey.

Haha. Y'know, in hindsight, I guess it IS pretty formulaic! I love to research, and do prefer precise clarity whenever possible, so that's how it expressed at the time.

You, on the other hand, build vaginas... that are really fences!

Trans-humanist?

(This is my attempt at humor... which I know I've now ruined with an awkward explanation, only left to not appear rude. So I opted for neurotic, instead.)

Don't worry. I still chuckled before the explanation, then laughed at the explanation.