'Sentiments' - a poem

in #life7 years ago (edited)

Every morning around six, I get up to the chirping of these lovely birds....

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A group of six to eight cuties, sitting on my window doors...
I feed them with a bowl of rice, and also a cup of water of course....
Because I feel within my heart, there are some 'Sentiments'...

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When my son goes on tours and trips...
I start visiting so many Temples..
Though I know he has grown up, good...
Still a prayer from my heart and mind.....
Because I feel within my heart, there are some 'Sentiments'

Though I know that he remains busy...
My call can make him feel so crazy...
Still, sometimes I give a miss call...
And wait patiently for his return call...
Because I feel within my heart, there are some 'Sentiments'

When I step into my garden, to see my dear plants well grown...
May be because of wind they swing, I think for me they nod and welcoming....
Those beautiful flowers, even the tiny grass - so fresh it looks....
Because I feel within my heart, there are some 'Sentiments'

Hi my dear Friends... My poem may look like a Kindergarten Rhyme...Thanks for enjoying!!

With much love, @geetharao.

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Great write..

Thank you so much... :)

Wow! I discover that your are brilliant poet, and professional painter, it's a nice feeling of motherhood in these lines, i enjoyed when i was reading them.
Happy weekend my dear.

Thank you...

Nice poem

Thank you so much...

Very true and beautiful sentiments and feelings. And you have woven them beautifully into a verse. @geetharao :) . Good writing :)

Hi @nehab... You inspired me to write these poems. You saw yesterday's? It is better than this I think..

:) :) My pleasure and my honour @geetharao ... Capacity to feel is a blessing of God. Talent is a gift of God. You just need to unlock the lock !! ... I read the poem . It is beautiful. Upvoted it :) . You have a talent for writing :)

Thank you so much... It's fine, and I'll be happy, even if you vote with 10 or 20 %..., if your voting power goes down...

But do read ok? Because after reading your top class writings, I too felt that I must start my writing again.. as I was doing in my childhood...

And as you said, capacity to feel is really a blessing. Thanks and hugs... :)

Of course I will read all your posts @geetharao. Because of my painting and other responsibilities, I am not very prompt or regular with internet. So I miss a few days, but catch-up later. I am very happy that you picked up the pen and started writing again. The only thing you need when writing or creating any art, is feeling. Also , it helps to express and understand and heal our own selves ... Cheers to you , @geetharao for always taking that step forward :) :)

My pleasure.. :)

There was a typing mistake in my saying. I rectified it. So sorry... I'll be happy even if you read and vote with a lesser percentage... I wanted to say...
Sorry once again...

Please do not apologise, @geetharao. I understood what you wanted to say :) . It is really no problems. I follow a bohemian philosophy.My thoughts and actions are irrespective of people and world. Regarding voting power and other steemit technicalities, I have no clue how these things work. And it does not bother me either !! :)
From writing, to painting, to reading ,and voting, I do as my heart says. :)

Thank you so much... :)

most welcome @geetharao. My pleasure :)