Like this a lot. Thank you for filling us in on your history with poetry and song writing. It makes sense as to why this is so well written and structured... I'd put you in the pro category personally... don't be modest now ;)
The weight of sadness and grief comes through in the words and as I read it, it was so strong that I almost felt it begin to weigh on me too.
Know that the past does not equal the future... you can always create a brighter day today... no matter what's happened in the past.
Just my 2 cents <3
Great to find you here, will be sure to keep in tune with your future submissions :)
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
<3
Aww you're awesome thank you! I guess I weigh professional poets as people who know everything about every rhyme scheme and structure out there. I just sort of write with a rythm and hope I find the right rhymes to fit. Haha
I'm definitely working on looking forward instead of back but it seems to be way easier said than done. Maybe I'll move to hawaii where the weathers always nice and the colors stay all year round. Someday.... (;
Hehe I'm definitely not a professional then under than definition -- not by a long shot! Passionate yes... but no pro hehe.
I have a poem about the past... if you send me your e-mail I'd be happy to send it to you and hope that the words in it may help you in some way...
Hawaii sounds great... it's important to change to an environment that doesn't hold the energy of the past / remind you of it wherever you go. I definitely think that's a good idea... I mean Hawaii is always a good idea right?!
Thank you for your comment. Here for support my friend, in your poetry and in life :)
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
<3
I would absolutely love to read it! Do you use discord?