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Asif Ali used her in all manners and to be clear he enslaved her in return of the favors he did to her by guaranting her the food. She was living a life of a whore a cheap slut who not only has to satisfy physical needs of Asif ali but he made her to sleep with his friends as they all shared ladies amongst. Sometimes Asif had also sent her to few local people as well.
Zara was living a life of distress, humiliation and guilt but whenever she saw her face in mirror she got more and more determined to provide her son better life. Pakistani government started a Madrasa for the refugees and Zara sent Shoaib there for education.
Five years passed by like this. Zara adjusted herself into this new settlement of life. She was happy that Shoaib was attending Madrasa. She, in her mind weaved a beautiful future for him. One night Asif came all drunk into her tent and started having sex with her in front of Shoaib. He tore her shirt and started biting over her breasts. He was squeezing her body in his big rough hands, He forced himself into her wildly and she screamed out of pain. He bit her lips until they started bleeding. This was not knew for Zara but she could not avoid Shoaib looking at her while Asif was raping her and she could do nothing to keep her son away to see his mother going through all this. Asif, after he raped her stood up and went away leaving her naked. Zara was left crying, humiliated and tortured. She did not even have strength to look for her son as she did not want to face her boy. She waited,waited and around two in the morning she stood up. She saw her son sleeping. Zara kissed Shoaib on his forehead with tears in her eyes but her face had no expression. She was dead internally and decided to end her life now. She prayed to god to look after Shoaib but for her, this was the time to go to Mohammad Khan. She walked out of the tent and started walking towards the highway. She was walking while thinking about all the incidents of her past, when she got married,the ceremonies, when she first saw Mohammad Khan. How Mohammad khan made her believe that she was the most beautiful women. How Mohammad khan loved her and the moment she gave birth to Shoaib. How happy they three were and suddenly the silence of night was broken by her scream. Zara Mohammad Khan jumped in front of a truck and there she was lying , all soaked in blood but now there was peace and rest.Now there was no suffering.She was free. Municipal Corporation cremated her and announced her stray.
Shoaib did not find her when he woke up in the morning. He looked around but could not find her.She was no where and then he found Asif. Where is my mother? Do you know Uncle. Ha ha ha ha ha Teri ammi, woh gai hogi kisse yaar ke saath moj masti karne, randiyon ka thikaana to khuda bhi nahi bata sakta, Chall dawfaa hoja yahan se haram ki aulad.....( Your mother,she must have fled with some lover. Whores do not have address. Get out of here you son of a bitch. Shoaib was taken back.He could not understand that why Asif was so rude to him and abusing him. Suddenly a security guard came and he whispered something to Asif... Ei haramkhor idhar aa.. Shoaib looked at Asif... Teri ammi chali gai hai kisse yaar ke saath par kehalwaya hai ki tujhe bade Madrasa mei bhejne ko,, Chalega kya?.( Come here you bastard. Your mother ran away with some rich man but she has arranged admission for you in a very big school. Do you want to go there?) Shoaib nodded in Affirmation....Asif told him to sleep in his tent. He crawled into a corner thinking about his mother that why she left him in this world alone on the mercy of people like Asif. He was feeling sad and angry, he was unable to understand that why his mother 'who loved him so much and who would herself sleep hungry but always made it sure that he had his meals'' would leave him like this into misery and loneliness. Asif shook him and told him to get up, it was morning already. He did not remember when he fell asleep. Asif smiled at him and said that he will send him to Madrasa where he will be fed good and shall be educated too and then after two hours he was sitting on the cycle and being taken somewhere he did not have any idea about.
To be continued...
This story has a big lesson and really when i started reading it created interest and i read all the post. Zara was humiliated by Asif but Zara had took her own life it is not good she must get revenge from Asif not from her and other thing her son remain alon it is not good
Beautifully written, @honeychum. Just beautiful. Very evocative and expressive. You have described the brutality and humiliation of rape extremely well. It evokes anger and sorrow. The humiliation and the shame and pain of Zara and her reaching the breaking point shakes the soul. The little boy's confusion, anger and lack of understanding due to age is so real. The evil manipulation of people like Asif is so accurate. I really like the way the episode ends with a twist and carving of a new path. And technically , this episode is flawless. Perfect grammar , spelling and structure. The supporting photo is also so apt....... Awesome, @honeychum :)
Thanks a lot Nehab. I am happy that you have noticed improvement. I am taking time to do proof reading now. Its friends like you who motivate and inspire to do better work.
My pleasure, @honeychum ... I always look forward to your work... It is a pleasure to travel with you in your journey as a writer. :) . Your efforts and improvement are awesome and amazing :) :)
"Zara was living a life of distress, humiliation and guilt but whenever she saw her face in mirror she got more and more determined to provide her son better life. Pakistani government started a Madrasa for the refugees and Zara sent Shoaib there for education."
This paragraph got me emotional.
Beautiful story. I love the fact that iiy has a glimpse of hope in it.
Waiting for your next article
@honeychum
Hope is the soul of this story and soul never dies. Hope is the soul of this story.
Yes, it is
Love your story, love your voice of words, can't wait for next episode to know what happened from the bicycle to where they were going.......... Thanks for such a beautiful story
Thanks a lot for your appreciation. :)
Zara is really a strong woman...am glad she is free now
She really was but everyone has limits and that incident was too much for her...
Oh my gosh. This is so sad. I can't wait for the continuation. Do you have any published books? Or e-books?
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Nice post! It's a good read. Something tells me I like episode 2 better :) . Keep doing more of these @honeychum we would like to read it.
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Really interesting piece. I read the episode 3 alone being my first time. I had to read the previous 2 episodes then this epidode again. Really factual story. Waiting for your next
Thanks a lot buddy.
@honeychum ! this really interesting and full of curiosity ... Nice one bud! and yeah you have quite good ability of writing. #vocabulary rich story!
So good story. I am waiting Episode 4.
While I'm reading this, I can't help but to think of star wars and I don't know why. Nice post by the way :)
Hy man how are you. Long time no see. By the why nice story. Loved it.
I am good buddy. Yes it had been a long time but good to see you again.
Very sad story just completed reading the first 2 parts.🙁😔.. What zara went through is really horrible and painful to read. Hy man when will you share part 4 of this story ?
Very soon bro..
Ooo. Ok waiting eagerly for the next part bro.
I have been following you systematically and truly your writing is improving. Great job @honeychum
Thanks brother.
God keep us for each other
w0o0www this time get something new to read on steemit. will love to read the previous episodes. keep going like that.
I have also read previous episodes and eager to read next one. You have an interesting approach which i liked already. Keep on!
Nice story.. waiting for next episode..
Thanks buddy.
So good. Beautiful story. I love the fact that iiy has a glimpse of hope in it. Great story. I like it.
What awesome story! Feelings define us as people and show us what we want to become on this earth to the end.
Thanks
Nice post from you love to wait for your next post.
Thanks buddy
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Great story and love to wait for your next post for a Journey toward the Nirvana. Thanks @honeychum for sharing.
Thanks buddy.
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Ohh, this is really a sad and panic story that I've ever read. How Zara suffers,how she bear the animal bastard man Asif, a cheapest and creepy person? Undoubtedly, she was a brave woman who bear one of the wildly person. But she couldn't leave her son alone in this world. I'm numbed at this time. I'm curious to know how will be the end of this story? :(
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