This is great! Really a fan, followed now.
I love the imagery, really interesting.
Great how you ended it on a "maybe it's true". Nice little hook.
I'm a writer too, some of it's not bad (https://steemit.com/writing/@ilovebatcatstew/the-musician) and some is awful. (No link because I want it to die off haha).
But my problem is I can't seem to get it noticed! Do you have any tips on getting work out there, so people can enjoy it?