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RE: SMILE FOR ME (an original poem)

in #life8 years ago

A rift was very quiet, no noise, such as the kung fu in slow motion. That's what I've tried to understand. But, I am not so clever to understand what is actually felt by the poet. Anyway I like the rhythm of his heart.

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The readers understanding is more importan than what the author meant )

Thank you, sir .. I'm just afraid of what I said that can offend you. But, you now have breathed air into my brain so that he can understand better. 🙂