Hello, @jeoleena
I agree with Piotr regarding using "ENTER" more often. Your post is interesting and well-written, but it would look quite a bit better if you took a bit of time, did some proper spacing, wrote in shorter paragraphs, and maybe added some sub-headings.
Just that little bit of extra effort makes posts look more attractive, and makes them more easy-to-read.
Do you know how to use the "EDITOR" function when writing your posts?
thank you @majes.tytyty for your suggestion. I will try and make my next post a better piece. thank you for your valuable piece of advice.