Hello @shaunbeingsocial,
Thank you very much for this good advice and tips for us newcomers. It is not easy to post everyday and be an active user. But I am trying.
By the way, I am glad you liked my first chapter, and I have just posted the second today. Please check it out and let me know what you think.
https://steemit.com/story/@mayliberty/good-nurse-bad-nurse-chapter-2-have-mercy-original-story 