PASSAGE

me-we (45)in #life • 7 years ago (edited)

Every move, every sound we make
Speaks a language, each syllable
Encrusted and dripping with sweet meaning,
Like tempura in some exotic sauce,
Perfectly exquisite--
Mingled tastes on the tongue
Shared with one another.
We feast and play and sing as
Our bright boat moves through unknown waters,
Sails filled with courage,
Our wake a stream of waves
Rippling through eternity.

7 years ago in #life by me-we (45)

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amri (59) 7 years ago

good poem friend, already like a poem, haha
thanks for sharing

me-we (45) 7 years ago

Thanks, Amri! Aloha, Temple

ahlawat (66) 7 years ago

Everyone's language is very good. What you wrote is very beautiful.

me-we (45) 7 years ago

Thank you! Aloha, Temple.

piyushkansal (59) 7 years ago

Wow nice write ups, nice to read it. thanks for sharing

me-we (45) 7 years ago

Thanks! Aloha, Temple

amri (59) 7 years ago (edited)

thanks for sharing @me-we

me-we (45) 7 years ago

My pleasure!

amri (59) 7 years ago

@me-we, where you come friend

me-we (45) 7 years ago

Hawai'i
Aloha, Temple

steemking777 (-4)(1) 7 years ago

me-we (45) 7 years ago

Cool. Thanks! Aloha, Temple