Thank you, glad you liked it, but you are forcing me a liiiittle bit by suggesting that and putting your link there, don't you think? I did check it out though, it is way too long so I don't have time to read it now, but I might get back to it though. The issue you're bringing to the table is indeed very serious.
From a quick scan though (as, among other things, I'm a content editor) I can say with certainty that it needs a loooot of editing, but it might be because of different formats (because I saw the same problems in more than one of your posts).
I do appreciate your effort though, especially considering your young age, so I won't be harsh on you or anything, but I'm sure you'll shine without telling anyone to check your posts - your posts themselves will push you forward! ;) (I already commented on some, you do have some interesting stuff there!)
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