This is really well written. Your imagery is dark yet enticing, which I seems to be what you are feeling in that moment. If you hadn't said this was a true story, I would have mistaken it for a well written piece of fiction. The material you are putting up here could easily be made into a film or full length novel. Is this a series you are planning to continue?
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Wow, thank you so much. I have a lot of stories about it, and tons of other things too. It is all nonfiction. I will just keep posting I suppose. If only I were a screenplay writer, eh?
Get enough content and you could find one, for sure. Or just put in character names in front of small sections and call it a day. ;)