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RE: Sweet Sorrow - Learning to Leave [Venezuela] #1

in #life7 years ago

Beautifully done. The repetition of the dogs and the lights and the potholes really joined up some interesting insights into what your days are like, and what you're leaving behind. And hopefully, where you are going will have less of that and more of something better.

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Thanks, Neg. I sure hope so! Until then, I'll try to make the most out of the time I have left here. Tie up lose ends and the like. This feeling of slowly drifting away from my current reality has made me look upon it with different eyes and really appreciate the little things. (I like that you liked the repetition. I think I may have achieved what I was going for with them!)