The way I had it mixed in with that, it didn't fit in, and could have been taken the wrong way. You're a writer. You get to a point, the flow is gone or the tone changes, chop that bit out, continue on. Something like that.
And you're right, probably. People ain't got time for dat shit. I even get shit for some of the things I've done that don't exist to add anything of importance to the mind other than a good time, hopefully; but it's too long...
But what you are doing right is applying personality. It's not an essay. Those types you speak of would for sure not touch an essay.
Don't be too hard on yourself if you feel like it was a flop. That was one of my flops.
Yes, I totally get it, I was just playing around man, I didn't take your words literally there, but I appreciate the clarification :D
Hahaha, "But it's too long," indeed. Exactly!
And yep, I'll just keep on keepin'-on, personality-style, yo, and thanks for sharing one of your 'flops', I'll give it a look. :)