Not all sentences are understandable, because they stop and a new half-sentence start. Maybe you should edit it...?
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Not all sentences are understandable, because they stop and a new half-sentence start. Maybe you should edit it...?
Sorry!
No need, I really liked it, but I think it will be better if all is straighted out :)
I will try to improve in the next posts.
And thank you for your attention