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RE: My promise

in #life7 years ago

@magdnrobinson,

Everyone loves a love poem. Beautiful sentiment. I might have chosen a few words differently though:

A promise to make you feel happy and save

But hey, that's the point of the Challenge, right? Steel sharpens steel.

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Thanks for commenting.
I'm not a poet, I just write what my heart tells me to write.
I know its not perfect or professional, it's what my heart speaks at the moment.
And true

steel sharpens steel

I'll try to keep testing my poetic abilities.