Hello my dear friend of steemit, today I share with you this writing, I hope you can connect with the expressed feelings.
I have decided to translate this poem because some friends may want to read it. Original post
Sometimes inspiration comes from scenes never imagined.
Colors from the soul.
Aquarelles, figures, mix of color, waterfall, for many it’s gray, He think that it`s colorful and beautiful. Sounds of the wind, shouting and uncontrol, there are white walls and He don’t see the aquarelle of his soul yet, there are dark walls without light, light flashes escape and even in the penumbra He imagine her gaze.
His hair is soaked with the rainwater,
He is soaked with the rain in his all body,
He watches colorful figures with spots,
He listens a soft and sweet voice, enchanted voice.
It`s still raining and he keeps looking,
He listens murmur from overwhelmed people,
He tries get up a support human,
But, he felt a hand push him for the ground,
He’s on the pavement, confused, wet,
He is afflicted, cry begging to the time,
Only a moment to open his eyes,
To look for the face from enchanted voice.
It’s already dawn, he is still there,
They pass by him, see him and mistreat him,
He wanted to do magic with sincere love,
He placed his dedication in a word,
Without looking her, he loved her from afar,
With his torn soul, it was a blind love.
Guitars, melodies, colors, courage, face not imagined, beauty and purity found, strength.
He run with strength that he borrowed,
To the rain, to the wind to his own soul,
He run following to the enchanted voice,
To the lethal shock of his despair.
He run to the stage in front of the singers,
He avoided the squeezes, he was strong,
He raised his arms and he song with yearning,
He touched with his voice a human fiber,
There was a blackout and only he sounded.
Now, she is looking for the enchanted voice,
From he who was lost in the dawn,
From he who feels, listens and sings,
From he who looks for without a look,
From he who sees colors through the soul.
I hope that you have liked my writing.
Remember that your comments are very important.
I am learning English, if you have any suggestion of the translation I will be grateful
hermoso los colores grandioso
Muchas gracias @newmanjosue también me gustan mucho.
gracias por tupost sandrag89 la verdad es que me gusto mucho sobre todo en modo nocturno
Si @diogenesvera18 tiene un toque especial, muchas gracias por tu comentario. Saludos!
Hermoso poema.
Gracias @haydeart por tus palabras y por pasar a visitar. Te deseo éxitos. Un abrazo!
🌷🌷 Gracias a ti, bueno es encontrar respuestas. 🌷🌷
Te deseo un feliz día
Excelente post! estuvo muy lindo.
Gracias @jogreh, te deseo muchos éxitos y una feliz tarde. Saludos!
Puro Amor
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Bello @sandrag89 me gusta la sintaxis, esta nutrido, tienen sentido los versos, son adecuados. Cuando quieras tips sobre estructuras de poemas y relatos no dudes en buscarme! Un abrazo! "Un amable consejo, trata de usar fotos tuyas, pof eso le da un toque mas único y autentico a los poemas"
Gracias @manuelramos en ocasiones me gusta escribir poemas lo hago desde la adolescencia, pero nada profesional por ahora. Sin embargo cada día trato de aprender más y más. Gracias por tus amables consejos, conste que te estas colocando a la orden jaja. Saludos!
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