Inspiration

in #life6 years ago (edited)

IMG_20180812_140006.JPGLife in this world is like a tree planted beneath the earth with different struggles and challenges each of us face,standing on our own to make this world a better place is not easy because we all have our problems we face,now is the time for us to remain focus and been united is a bond that can never be torn apart like the three fold cord,we all have our skills and talent let us be wise to use them because been united to make this world a better place brings good result we all have our differences,and we all know that it takes a day to say am a leader and another a follower. Life on its own is not what we take it to be but having a good mind set can conquer anybody.life is continous and precious and we need to value it let us not give up in doing what is fine be your brothers keeper in times of need,I know that at the end of the day we all will have more course to be grateful and thankful that we are indeed free from the blood of all men.

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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

Life on it's own is not what we take it to be but having a good mind set can conquer anybody.
It should be its own instead of it's own.