Well done! Nice imagery, well laid out, a great story told in an interesting way. Because I'm here to critique, in case you care (rules are meant to be broken) Lymericks traditionally hold to five lines, with 9,9,6,6,9 syllables, and the first, second and fifth lines rhyming each other, while the third and four lines rhyming each other. But, like I said, rules are meant to be broken and this is funny! Good job, well done.