TRICKED (An Original Poem)

in #love8 years ago

You told me to close my eyes
Told me there was something
I had doubts
but eager to please
I shut my eyes

An aroma of excitement
A tension builds
The finite distance between us
only crushing
all is but a vacuum

The air is stiff
noises hush
everything stands still
and I wait

and before I realize
a warmth spreads
from the origin
to my absolute
a sweetness fills my mouth

that was the moment
I knew I had been kissed
and You told me to close my eyes
as there was something

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Hey!
A nice poem. You seem to have been writing since quite a while now. Hope to see some more brilliant work. Good luck :D

Thank bro. Motivated reading your work. :)

Hait! This is very sensual. Paints pictures in your mind.

Thank you bro.. The chord has been struck... Kachingggg

The link to my original work at Tricked