@michanny nice love story you have written, I wonder this is a real story of a make-up. Generally, there is not much of an issue with the article as I believed it is written out from your own words.
However, I am concerned those images that you have inserted may be infringed copyright unless you already got written permission to use it or you are a subscriber of ShuttleStock.
Merely provide the image source does not grant you the permission though
Anyway, that is my opinion
Good luck
It's a real story. And yes I'm a subscriber of shuttlestock. Thanks anyway @digitalmind