Just because you know I'm that guy, I noticed there is no comma (,) after Negril, Jamaica. You also wrote bitcon (no i) which may or may not have been intentional depending on your position regarding cryptocurrencies. Also, "You must have a Steem account" is harsh language, try "A Steem account is required, sign up for free at ...." or reach out to us at...
Other than those minor issues, this is exactly what we've been looking for!
Good eye CAT, you see words like you see figures:) gonna get on it first thing in the morning phone just died. BTW I made this with CANVA .
Good looking out man, much appreciated.
Fixed, I hope it sticks, give it another look please.