The fall

in #microfiction6 years ago

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It wasn’t something that happened overnight but over half a century. Gradually, incrementally, we accepted that the ever-increasing control of our movement, our language and our thoughts was essential for our safety, as fabricated threats induced us to trade our rights for the illusion of security. Most failed to see the net closing around us and those who did were ridiculed and silenced.

Mandatory shots for the good of our health drugged us up, and medication in the water dumbed us down. People became confused, no longer responding to logic and reason, as truth became false, censorship was freedom, left became right and right was wrong.

With a basic income for everyone and all work done mechanically, skills and expertise were lost to us, and few knew any longer what it was to build or create, to read or write, to communicate other than verbally through their intelligent personal assistant. Carbon taxes on farming followed by extreme global cooling eventually moved all food production from the fields to the laboratory, and ultimately our dependence was total.

So it was that in the last years before the great reset, our once great race of scientists, artists and thinkers became solely consumers, entirely in thrall to the machines.

Posted in response to @jayna's microfiction challenge

The prompt this week was CONTROL

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Such a grim story but well crafted. Thanks for sharing the fiction that is so close to what we are now experiencing.

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I have been gone for a while obviously, and I have missed a lot. I hope I'm forgiven.
What I seriously wish, from the bottom of my heart, is that I learn your style and constructions. Seriously, I wish this, everytime I see any of your writings. I would be glad if you can do something about it.
Thanks.

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The sheep are in for a rude awakening. Extremely well told story. My rant would have gone on for days. Don't even get me started.

Much to the delight of my friends and family, I am a woman of very few words;)
Thanks for reading m'dear. Your support is much appreciated as always.

So that is why you like to write short stories! : )
Thank you for your support as well babe!

I don't know why I haven't been running across your stories for a while. Perhaps I ought to figure that out and fix it! Good story!

My stories are so very short as to be almost invisible.......no wonder you haven't been running across them;)
Thanks a lot for the support.

Mystery solved: I wasn't following you! Thought I was. Oops.

Well done, @deirdyweirdy. I agree with @ammonite. This seems like a summary of or a part of a much longer work! I think a lot of people today would see much truth in this Orwellian story, where it turns out the way to control the masses is to get them to agree willingly to the terms.

Cheers Jayna, I must say I see a lot of truth in it myself. I feel sometimes as if the whole world has been flipped on its head. Everything seems to be upside down.

I agree. And so do many many others. That is what gives me hope — that we can set things on a better course again, where the environment, fairness, respect for all, and a healthy global economy prevail.

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I wish I could share your optimism but it seems to me that our freedom is being attacked from every angle and we're walking, heads down and phones in hand, into the cage being constructed around us. We're so divided by nonsense like left/right, Christian/Moslem that we're fighting each other instead of realising that if we don't hang together we'll all hang separately.

I do really believe it will be okay. It’s just really scary right now.

Grim, but accurate vision.

Indeed, as far as I can see we're only a few years away from just this scenario.
Cheers for the comment.

Howdy deirdyweirdy! I don't know how I missed this brilliant piece of writing but I did. It's perfect for the prompt and it looks like what we're headed for dog gonnit!

Do not worry your pretty little head, my sweet Mr. J.
Better never late than late never;)

Now I want to read the whole Novel. Like the opening of a George Orwell Novel. Bravo.

You're too kind.

Oh you little cheat...this challenge was supposed to be 'fictitious' and you went right ahead with present day reality...

Geezzzz.....what are we to do with you @deirdyweirdy sneaking in the truth????

I never let truth get in the way of a good story m'dear.

I might follow your lead in the future...

to be continued- Part 1 of a 666 part story,

Are we there yet?

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Unfortunately, I think we are almost there.

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