You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Endings, a story in 100 wordsView the full contextwakeupkitty (71)in #microfiction • 6 years ago I hope she did open a letter addressed to him... Posted using Partiko Android
Oh dear, maybe I didn't tell the story very well. The cancer diagnosis was hers, not his. So no, she didn't open a letter belonging to him.
What a pity... but to be honest I knew it was hers... wonder if he would stay now... it reminds me of "Inspector Frost".
I reckon he probably will stay unless he's a really heartless bum.
And that would break him too.since he intended to leave... so the question is.. who will speak out first?
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Interesting! I wonder if @wakeupkitty means she is on the woman's side, since the man is leaving her... and it would be "just desserts" if the diagnosis was actually his, not hers. You told the story very well!
In this case I am, thanks
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Oh, I see what you mean. I didn't understand her correctly. Sorry @wakeupkitty. I get what you mean now thanks to jayna.
Does not matter... I think a story is written great if readers can interpret it in their own way
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