Last night I could still edit it - so I thought I would be able to improve it this morning, but I see it won't let me edit it any more. So you learn!
For such a complex subject I think having more frequent shorter articles will work better, this one was way too long and I feel a bit ashamed for posting it without more editing (which I have done since! Not sure what to do with that, now... :-D)
#Steemit has attracted a really great community! It's really refreshing and encouraging to find a community where people actually read and contribute to the conversation.