Greetings,
as you're new here I'd like to inform you that it is not well received on Steemit when people in general just copy other peoples texts, content and work to republish it here as you have the ability to earn money via Steemit.
To avoid any flags and hidings of your post, please write and share your own content and stories. It's indeed nice that you linked the source, but Steemit does not value copy-pasting from somewhere else. They value original content. ;)
There are, so-called, "Plagiarizer" blacklists that could make life on Steemit very hard, and we don't want aspiring authors and bloggers on these lists just because "they didn't know".
Good day.