Sounds like a well-thought through post and I enjoyed reading it. Especially this part:
Rational thinking is one of the traits that we are mature.
However, I noticed there are some Indonesian language mixed up in the English part. Hehe. Cos I am from Malaysia and some of the words you have are similar to our Malay language. But overall, good effort! :)
hehe, I'm glad you read my post seriously. I am still learning to write a sister, thanks to his advice. I am from indonesia and best regards to team malaya. hopefully our communication will continue.