Aftermath - Hip Hop/Rap :) Enjoy! 💚

[positivity420]

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[therealblank]

The lyrics and beat are nice. Only thing is you seem "insincere" when you read the lyrics. You have to find a way to draw out emotion so you're rapping sounds more "sincere" and "powerful" because I really like it how it sounds but it sounds like you're sleepy and that turns me off and no doubt turns off other people.
Hope u found this criticism constructive!

[positivity420]

Thank you for the advice my fellow Steemer, I appreciate it, I tried to stay linear because a little movement in my head makes distortion in sound because it was recorded on headset microphone, I will try to bring more emotion without distortion of my voice, maybe I find a way to cut out the distortion, thank you again for the criticism! :) I would love to link you my other rap session, but dsound has trouble with 7 days older music... at least for me :/

[exanime15]

Go man, don't stop :D

[positivity420]

Thank you :) I can't wait to get a proper mic, then it will be music to lose it :D

[ivan.atman]

Cool lyrics bro :) some nihilistic input there and all bit of OG in there but all in all you write some mean lyrics 😄 mic check mic check...

[positivity420]

Bro, you always give me so many new terms to study, I didn't know what oligarchy is until you mentioned it(yes I remember) nor did I know what nihilism is :) Thank you for that, even in a compliment you spread the knowledge! Thank you, I give my best to spread values and mindfuck, as well some hard truth here and there through lyrics :) Old school bro, old school!

[bil.prag]

love the lyrics. that is all i can say about rap music :D

[positivity420]

Thank you for tuning in :) I understand completely, rap is mostly to just enjoy and leave you speechless :D

[bil.prag]

:)

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[mixology]

Šta da ti kažem,a da bude nešto novo :) tekst pun pogodak, za mikrofon nemoj da brineš, bitno je da ti slažeš rime, radiš ono što voliš,a i ide ti dobro. Mikrofon će doći i nemoj da te to brine, bitno je šta poručuješ. Samo napred i kao uvek podrška od mene.

[positivity420]

Hvala puno, mikrofon ce doci kad vratim lerove hahhaha. Bitno mi je da ljudi shvate poruku hvala ti brate 💚

[zen-art]

Very nice lyrics, amazing actually, good job!!! This will be my song of the day 💚

[positivity420]

Thank you I am honored as I am not any popular musician 💚

[tonac]

Could you be quiet, I wanna hear your soul

Fireeeeeee in the house. You killed a beat, this thing is very special my mate. You rock, just keep on going and as I said I'm waiting invitation to the stage 🔥

[positivity420]

Thank you my friend I am glad you enjoyed it. Definitely! You beatbox and I'll say a bit of wisdom hahahah

[tonac]

Sounds cool haha

[megy.fine.arts]

If there is no struggle, there is no progress. Brilliant work my friend! But these lyrics...left me speechless.

[positivity420]

Thank you, my friend. Good thing you can write hahha :) Jokes aside, it means a lot to me, thank you!