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RE: ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 20)

in #music6 years ago

Why must we compare?
The night sky that shines so bright provides a light for all to see.

The stars that shine the brightest are the stars that shine through the night and give off the most light.

What about the stars that put off very little light? Don't they have the right to shine just as bright?

I refuse to criticize the star that doesn't shine as bright as the stars around it at night.

Sure its friends put off so much light but its light is just as nice.

It must refuse to lose it must still fight... Continue to fight, the good fight.

So here's to the stars that just don't shine as bright.

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Good times ahead and I'm confident.

Clear toxins like anti-oxidants.

What we gotta do here's significant.

Can you feel what I'm saying its providence.

And what we got here is true competence.

So do what you love and claim dominance...

Copy the first part completely, because it inevitably impacts, it is irrefutable that we usually compare ourselves

It is the fault of the society that has corrupted us, it pushes us to be a banal character, in search of more money, more power, more luxuries, the best love, the best car

Wanting to humiliate each other, when the stars that shine the brightest are those that guide us, inspire us, are the leaders

like a shooting star, when it passes in front of everyone, everyone asks for a wish, for how wonderful they are they give inspiration

Instead of opaque, they propel us

The fallen stars I interpret it with the dead people, or those who are dead in life, defeated by the sadness, by those people we must continue shining,

they think they don't shine so brightly, if they knew they're the ones that inspire us to shine,

When you write the word friend, it absorbs enough the message and content, a friend does not humiliate nor opaque, always give us the push we need,

the first part in general, inspires me to continue fighting, for those who stopped shining, shine twice for them

The second part, the last part linked it with the first part, good times are approaching, what we do here is important = life purpose.

The message is clear, the real competition is the one that drives you to be your best version, not to want to be better than others,

How do you do that? doing what you love, that's where you get an independent soul, self-control, and not that character that puts us society

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Thanks for your ideas and thoughts on this piece! I would say that the first step to being the best version of what we can be without wanting to be others is just consciously projecting that as much as possible. We are fickle creatures and must use repetition to our advantage.

I'm pleased, your welcome! be authentic, we are creatures of habits, repeating productive habits that influence us to excellence. ♥