I made a Hip Hop kind of composition. It's very classical in a way, not just 2 notes and drums. Not to knock two notes and a drum, because I can't really make that work. That being said, I give you Piemonte. Its for a rapper... but I would love some feedback.

Not bad. Try to cut down on the reverb. And it seems a bit hard to follow at times. But keep doing what you're doing.
What really helped for my beats was having a separate space for every sound in my headphones.
What do you mean by separate space for every sound?