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RE: #NaNoWriMo and #FreewriteMadness Has Begun! My First Effort

in #nanowrimo6 years ago

What an exciting and interesting beginning of a love story! I am sensing love triangle with Sarah, Mark and Andre with what seems an unspoken part from Andre. I have a feeling that Sarah and Mark like each other which seems a little obvious to Andre. Sensing that, Andre tries to tease Sarah while keeping his feelings to himself.

And ahhh... It looks like I'm guessing too much. The next chapter sounds like something to look forward to. 😊