Oh, those last two lines take it deeper into another poem.
I read this before writing my daily piece which is not my normal as not to be front-loaded, however, I just could not wait when I spied the topic over at the Isle.
Beautiful. :)
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You're a perceptive spirit, no surprise; last 2 lines are an opening onto the vast... world view in a couplet.
I know what you mean about not taking in outside influences, when one is pregnant, before delivering :)
Thanks, for breaking your rules and I look forward to reading your piece.