Cool artwork and i really enjoyed the story, i hope it will be a work in progress and other people will join in:) Maybe you can present it paragraph to paragraph with accompanied with an image:) Welcome to ntopaz and looking froward for more:)Also i should inform that there is an ongoing sci-fi contest, maybe you would like to take part, check it here:https://www.ntopaz.com/contest/61
Thanks for the tip, I'll check it out. Thinking of maybe writing a short story based on this later,... maybe, lol. Glad you like the work!