I'm SO bummed! I thought the deadline was Friday, didn't realize it was Monday. I thought I was early, but it turns out I've missed it 😒
On the other hand... I'm proud of myself for coming up with a song using "special delivery"... at first I didn't think I could do it, extra special thanks to @chrisroberts and @jaybird for inspiration 😊
SPECIAL DELIVERY
There's a message I wish I could send you
But I don't know the words
We did the right thing
By breaking
Apart
But my heart will always be yours
The last thing I want is to confuse you
By telling you the truth
That it messes with my head
To be in bed
With her
Thinking of you
If only I could let you know
You're with me wherever I go
You're with me whatever I do
That having you in my arms
Was the best thing
It changed everything
And I will never stop loving you
We did the right thing
We did the right thing
It's true
But I wish I could let you know
You're with me wherever I go
You're with me whatever I do
That having you in my arms
Was the best thing
It changed everything
And I will never stop loving you
So If I could I'd send you this message
Special delivery
Directly to your heart
Bypassing thought
So you could see you
The way I see
If only I could let you know
You're with me wherever I go
You're with me whatever I do
That having you in my arms
Was the best thing
It changed everything
And I will never stop loving you
We did the right thing
We did the right thing
It's true
Right on Man, pulled this tune off well. T'was a particularly difficult theme i thought to write something more serious while saying "special delivery" lol.
I mean I never even said those two words back to back in my tune.
Love the guitaring in this too, played some of those sweet chords up the neck that i like!
Cool voice btw.
lolo yeah such a cheesy phrase to try and write a song from 😅 I didn't expect to use the actual words in my song either, and then... there they were. Many thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it. Watching your entry and @chrisroberts inspired me to try it out, so thanks for that too :)
That's so inspiring bro. Keep it up
Thanks man, glad you liked it! Following you :)
You might have missed the deadline, but I see you've been rewarded for your efforts - thinks tend to work out when you put in the hours.
I think it came out great, and you've a pretty good voice and flow in general. I'll be following you from now on. These Steemit Open Mics are a trove full of treasure in the form of great Steemers.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Following you as well :)
This was really good.
It felt really honest. 💞
Thank you! It was a challenge, but it's a song I've been needing to write for awhile. Glad you liked it :)
Have you just wrote this song recently for steemit? Good job.. I write my own music as well..
Yes, written for the songwriter's competition.
I checked out your page, beautiful guitar work, writing and vocals! You should participate in the weekly open mic ;)
Following you :)
That was beautiful! The time frames here are REALLY challenging for some things, aren't they? Way to rise to the occasion... if a little late lol!
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it! And... they accepted the entry :D
Glad to hear that it was accepted. It was a great song. Good luck. I need to learn more about these contests.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Re: contests, there are writing ones, photo ones, art ones etc. If you click on "contest" tag you'll find some :) Following you!
Good entry, man! Nice!
Thanks so much I'm glad you liked it :)
cool song bro.
Thanks man! Hey your band has a great sound :) Following you
thank you. you too
Justo tengo el mismo sentimiento.. Buena canción, totalmente identificado hermano.. Gracias, me sentà acompañado.
So glad you liked it and could relate! I'm glad we are connected here on Steemit my friend :)
Es un gusto compartir hermano..
You seem very passionate about your music @bennettitalia :)
Well.... yes, I am pretty much passionate about everything 🤣 But music absolutely. Thanks for your comment, following you
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great tune my friend pulled it out
Thank you @soundlegion! Glad you enjoyed it :D